For the introductory portion of my paper, I used the comments left to me by my peer group to make effective and orderly changes to improve the quality of my essay. To specify, there was a sentence or two at the top of my paragraph, that was a claim, and though my peers thought it was a solid and great claim, they felt that it needed to be moved down to the bottom of the paragraph in order to flow more appropriately and to give a more ordered and professional feel. The quote was, “Many narratives that use the category of victim, often do not fall within the allotted boundaries of a victim narrative.” By moving this down to the bottom of the page I improved the quality of my intro. I added more of an in depth and detailed essence to my body paragraphs after going through my initial draft. More evidence was used to better my explanations of what exactly I was writing and what I was specifically getting at for my hitting points. When it comes to reorganization, I certainly reworked some of my sentence structure around to add more flow, specifically the piece with the claim that I had mentioned earlier in this reflection. I also added/changed some of the quotes structure and the text leading up to those quotes. From my first draft, I was missing a concluding paragraph, I added that into my final, which completed the process, giving me a paper I felt truly confident with. It then came down to the more behind the scenes changes, whether it was simple grammatical changes, punctuation, or sentence flow, I went through and cleaned that stuff up to produce a paper I knew was presentable.